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MOONLIT NIGHT
Contributed by
robertkilpatrick
on
Sunday, 11th July 2004 @ 07:03:01 PM in AEST
Topic:
Lifepoems
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And Oh, you whisper in my Ear,
A sweet tender tone, will fill the air,
For you are the One , that I care,
You are my love, my only, my dear.
I,ll feed you grapes, from the vine,
For you are always, always to be mine,
With Fruits of the field, we will dine,
And a juicy sweet Mandarin wine.
Silken Golden thread you'll wear,
Riding on an Apache mare,
Stardust and fragrant incense hair,
Knowing my love, I,ll always be near.
Lips tender to the touch,
Oh, I love you, Love you so much,
We'll swim naked in the running stream,
Where the waters quiver and gleam.
And there on that Moonlit night
We'll take passion, to its highest height,
Moonlit reflection, shines on your lucent face,
And the water runs off your body,like Golden lace.
Robert Kilpatrick
Copyright ©
robertkilpatrick
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Re: MOONLIT NIGHT
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by xxbreathlessx on
Sunday, 11th July 2004 @ 07:29:15 PM AEST
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| wow oh wow, that is so beautiful. i love the descriptions and imagery, you did such a wonderful job on this! |
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Re: MOONLIT NIGHT
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by Former_Member on
Sunday, 11th July 2004 @ 07:32:54 PM AEST
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Stirring sensual overtones with the beauty of Nature. What could be more beautiful and enticing.
Rita |
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Re: MOONLIT NIGHT
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by PieceOfABrokenSoul on
Sunday, 11th July 2004 @ 07:35:53 PM AEST
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Very good, very descriptive. A scene I've always imagined sharing with that special soul.
Great write.
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Re: MOONLIT NIGHT
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by LovingWhispers on
Sunday, 11th July 2004 @ 07:46:18 PM AEST
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The whole piece created a gorgeous scene in my mind,left me daydreaming lol..
"Silken Golden thread you'll wear,
Riding on an Apache mare,
Stardust and fragrant incense hair,
Knowing my love, I,ll always be near."
*sigh*
LW |
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Re: MOONLIT NIGHT
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by darkfairy1188 on
Sunday, 11th July 2004 @ 08:23:02 PM AEST
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very good use of imagry and very romantic. very well done. keep it up ;)
~Sara |
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Re: MOONLIT NIGHT
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by blueheart on
Sunday, 11th July 2004 @ 09:09:18 PM AEST
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You've described such elegant love.
Beautiful and amazingly sensual. |
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Re: MOONLIT NIGHT
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by PumpkinPie on
Sunday, 11th July 2004 @ 09:47:11 PM AEST
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Why oh why can't all men write beautiful stuff like this?You sure brought me elsewhere throughout the entire read,I found this to be an exquisite beauty in every way.May your pen keep writing poems such as this,pure and from the heart.
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Re: MOONLIT NIGHT
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by Archie on
Monday, 12th July 2004 @ 04:19:00 AM AEST
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| I think a lot of woman will be flocking to read your poetic sultry words. |
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Re: MOONLIT NIGHT
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by pixie on
Monday, 12th July 2004 @ 05:19:33 AM AEST
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This is beuatiful, you have such a way with expression,..... wonderful job,
pixie xx |
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