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Ending
Contributed by
dirtyfool
on
Sunday, 11th July 2004 @ 08:38:56 PM in AEST
Topic:
Suicide
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I gasp for air,
But it dosen't seem fair,
To have this Breath,
Instead of Death,
I hold back the tears,
And forget my fears,
All that's left is sadness,
I'm down with this madness,
This is the Ending,
The Broken Heart isn't mending,
There is no future in sight,
I end it tonight
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dirtyfool
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2004-07-11 20:38:56]
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Re: Ending
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by emystar on
Sunday, 11th July 2004 @ 09:01:03 PM AEST
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Tottally sad but written well.
hugs, faith, hope,
emy |
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Re: Ending
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by frohemiasweetie on
Sunday, 11th July 2004 @ 10:42:50 PM AEST
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| Direct, effective. Sad as hell, but it is suicide poetry. Misery can make one determined, even to negative avail. |
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Re: Ending
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by mlcarter369 on
Monday, 12th July 2004 @ 04:18:05 AM AEST
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| its right to the point no if ands or buts and i like it |
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Re: Ending
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by Ceres on
Monday, 12th July 2004 @ 10:55:21 PM AEST
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Very sad, but I guess that's the easiest stuff to write huh? It was short and to the point, but very good!
- Ceres |
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Re: Ending
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by brew on
Friday, 10th September 2004 @ 10:04:37 AM AEST
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| Straight to the point, but very , deep and sad. Sorry~! Try to smile......things do get better |
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