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MY LONELY HOME
Contributed by
twesten
on
Sunday, 11th July 2004 @ 10:09:56 PM in AEST
Topic:
selfstruggles
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MY LONELY HOME
well Where do I start.
I'm now living far apart,
from those close to my heart.
In a world unfamiliar to me.
torment and anguish are all I see,
dont think I'll ever be free.
As time creep's by I only get worse.
Sounds as though I preach the same verse,
Im stuck living life under a curse.
Living this life all alone.
Wake up each morning on my own,
I guess I will call this my lonely home.
T.West
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twesten
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2004-07-11 22:09:56]
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Re: MY LONELY HOME
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by 2ndChance on
Sunday, 11th July 2004 @ 10:28:21 PM AEST
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I find your poem strictly touching.
The rhyming really adds a whole level to it.
Good job! |
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Re: MY LONELY HOME
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by tifrob on
Monday, 12th July 2004 @ 03:32:10 PM AEST
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Your poem is heart breaking. The reader can feel the pain/sadness that you describe. That in itself makes this a great poem.
Good Luck,
J~ |
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