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Someone To Cry For...
Contributed by
2ndChance
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Sunday, 11th July 2004 @ 10:26:50 PM in AEST
Topic:
SecretLove
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The one who makes you cry,
is not worth it.
The one who's worth it,
will never make you cry.
A long time ago,
you meant everything to me.
But everything means nothing,
and nothing's changed.
You talk and you talk,
all day long,
yet you do not say anything.
You listen and you listen,
forever nest to me,
but you don't hear a word.
I can't breathe here...where you keep me.
Between a dark and cold place.
Alone,
I sit,
waiting for the day,
when you'll open the door,
to your heart.
So many thoughts,
I walk upon clouds,
and when I start to slip from my imaginary reality,
you kiss me again.
The one who makes you cry,
is not worth it.
The one who's worth it,
will never make you cry.
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2ndChance
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2004-07-11 22:26:50]
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Re: Someone To Cry For...
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by frohemiasweetie on
Sunday, 11th July 2004 @ 10:34:25 PM AEST
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| I really like that poem. I can relate. Its real hard to let something bad go because its all you have to hold. Great write, as they say. |
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Re: Someone To Cry For...
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by emystar on
Sunday, 11th July 2004 @ 11:02:58 PM AEST
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I know the feeling but mine had to go 'cause he didn't have a heart it turns out.
Very good write here.
huggs, luv,
emy |
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Re: Someone To Cry For...
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by brokenwings on
Sunday, 11th July 2004 @ 11:08:44 PM AEST
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thank you so very much for the words i couldn't say but are trapped within my heart
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Re: Someone To Cry For...
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by Archie on
Monday, 12th July 2004 @ 07:39:06 PM AEST
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| Wow, this is good. After reading your song I had to check out another of your poems. This is very cool. |
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Re: Someone To Cry For...
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by fastpitchqt on
Tuesday, 20th July 2004 @ 02:03:46 PM AEST
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| I know that the one whose worth it will never make u cry, but the one i want and is perfect for me makes me do nothing but cry now a days. Broken heart is all im left with, and so many unanswered questions. When u truly love someone tears dont mean nothing, love hurts and tears are just a part of it! |
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Re: Someone To Cry For...
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by Live2Die on
Sunday, 24th October 2004 @ 12:45:26 AM AEST
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| Wow...alot of what you don't post on narfland I can only say "Wow" to. These are so great. keep writing. You have amzaing talent no matter how much you deny it. |
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