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I’m gonna kill my-self…

Contributed by deathdrop on Monday, 12th July 2004 @ 03:17:28 PM in AEST
Topic: Suicide

If I cut then Zo will be sad.
If I do then youll be glad.
If I trash my room then my mum will go nuts.
If I give it gob Ill be told to shut up
If I punch Ill still feel low.
And if I get going then I know, Ill break bones.
If I keep taking all the stuff you give,
I know any way Ill lose my will to live.
If I keep falling Ill hit the ground.
But I cant get up when spikes surround!
If I walk away Ill be on the run.
And be forced to come, back and face my mum.
If I start crying then my tears will never end.
If I slit Ill start that off again.
If keep thinking I know Ill break more.
But I feel so suicidal that I dont care any more!
Coz the bottom line is harsh but it only holds whats real.
I get picked on so much! So my body Im gonna kill.
Coz if Im so hated wheres the use?
And its now or soon, coz it's all chewing at my fuse!

Copyright Â© deathdrop ... [ 2004-07-12 15:17:28]
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Re: I’m gonna kill my-self… (User Rating: 1 )
by brokensoul on Monday, 12th July 2004 @ 03:20:28 PM AEST
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amazing write you captured how i felt in my past suicidal stages

Re: I’m gonna kill my-self… (User Rating: 1 )
by Ceres on Monday, 12th July 2004 @ 09:39:19 PM AEST
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Definently good! Never had the feeling myself but... Let's just say that reading your poem, I get that feeling a little.
- Ceres

Re: I’m gonna kill my-self… (User Rating: 1 )
by Rhea on Tuesday, 13th July 2004 @ 06:23:57 PM AEST
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AWESOME! Just by reading your poem.....I felt the pain you feel. I loved it! Great work!

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