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Can't quite
Contributed by
jonteD
on
Monday, 12th July 2004 @ 03:31:09 PM in AEST
Topic:
war
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From where I am,
I cant quite see the President,
But Im sure he looks smart,
Smiles without fear,
Just wish he could see me here.
From where I am,
I cant quite hear the President,
But know the words are calming,
The crowd hang on every noun,
Just wish they could see me frown.
From where I am,
I cant quite smell the President,
But fresh roses surely the odour,
All singing the same song,
Just wish I could sing along.
From where I am,
I cant quite touch the President,
But hed be willing to meet a soldier,
If only I could give him a wave,
Just wish I wasn't in this grave.
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Re: Can't quite
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by Jenni_K on
Monday, 12th July 2004 @ 03:39:35 PM AEST
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Beautifully written and so sad, Jon....
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Re: Can't quite
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by _Raspberry_ on
Monday, 12th July 2004 @ 03:40:40 PM AEST
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Woah, a completely unexpected poem, very touching, and expessive Really great write
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