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mistakes
Contributed by
Hannah_Heaven
on
Monday, 12th July 2004 @ 04:40:29 PM in AEST
Topic:
EmotionalPoetry
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cant you see
that all my mistakes
were because you smuthered me
and everything you told me to do
was the opposite
i feel like im being played
STOP CONTROLLING ME
i want to be nothing like you
i want to be ME
i dont care if i fail
as long as im content with who iam
i dont care if my life is shattered with mistakes
and dusted along my path
its my path to walk
and its MY mistakes
and as i learn
i will pick them up and recycle them as my life turns
and the sun rises
i will be renew
and i wont be tired of disappointed faces
and useless grunts of anger
i will be full of my own mistakes
and i will love them
as my mistakes will become works of power urging me on...
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2004-07-12 16:40:29]
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Re: mistakes
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by drummerchic18 on
Monday, 12th July 2004 @ 08:34:02 PM AEST
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| THis is excellent. I can relate. I have had many incidents like this with my father and my older sister. Everyone told me I was exactly like them both and I refuse to believe and accept that. My father would tell me that i would never be good enough and finally I realized that as long as I was happy with me, I didn't need anyone else's approval. Keep strong, keep on keepin on. |
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