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Disolving sight
Contributed by
Ami_and_me
on
Friday, 25th October 2002 @ 11:00:00 AM in AEST
Topic:
SadPoetry
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Sight blurring
Ears whirring
Tongue choking
Fire smoking
Fingers numb
Silence; dumb
Ears burning
Heat yearning
Melting skin
Life worn thin
Mind dripping
World slipping
Brain fever
Non - beliver
Honest lies
Truth disguised
Copyright ©
Ami_and_me
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2002-10-25 11:00:00]
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Re: Disolving sight
(User Rating: 1 )
by Ash on
Monday, 16th December 2002 @ 12:55:24 PM AEST
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| Yet again, I love it. I really enoy reading your works, kep it up. |
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Re: Disolving sight
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by ladyfawn on
Saturday, 4th January 2003 @ 08:41:53 PM AEST
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Dearest Ami @-<-<<
Great write.. love how you did this one:)
so very powerful...
your friend,
always Nessa |
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Re: Disolving sight
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by sodapopsuicide on
Friday, 18th April 2003 @ 10:31:26 PM AEST
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| wow i love the simpleness of it. great write!! |
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