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If only I had wings
Contributed by
WestCPunk
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Monday, 12th July 2004 @ 07:27:22 PM in AEST
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If only I had wings.....
I could fly away from this nightmare
This life that is not completely fair
I could fly away to a place where no one knows me
Somewhere by the sea
I would never have to look back
On all the things I lack
Or anything that brought me to tears
Like looking in the mirror
There would be no more broken dreams
No more shadows to sneak up on you
Silent and unseen
There would be time to do
The things I'd like to do
Never a dull moment
And no more broken hearts to mend
I could start my life all over again......
If only I had wings.....
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Re: If only I had wings
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by drummerchic18 on
Monday, 12th July 2004 @ 07:58:28 PM AEST
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| I have felt like this before in my life. THis truly explains and picturizes the feeling of wanting to fly over and basically "get away" very very good |
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Re: If only I had wings
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by xxbreathlessx on
Monday, 12th July 2004 @ 08:41:35 PM AEST
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| trsut me i def. feel what you mean..to just escape, you have a great poem here, awesome write. |
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Re: If only I had wings
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by blueheart on
Monday, 12th July 2004 @ 08:58:30 PM AEST
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To obtain wings to achieve freedom, how wonderful would that be!
I can relate, great write. |
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Re: If only I had wings
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by arden on
Monday, 19th July 2004 @ 04:07:06 PM AEST
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wow shelbi, this was ... i cant explain it.
i loved this. the title the way its written, just everything about it is amazing.
great write girl
5 stars
Becky |
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