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Nothing
Contributed by
xxbreathlessx
on
Monday, 12th July 2004 @ 08:36:54 PM in AEST
Topic:
selfstruggles
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Nothing
I`m nothing of how I want
To be.
Not even the tears that
Cascade down my cheeks
Are free.
They are Prisoners…of me.
Nothing that’s I`d dream
That I would be,
When I was younger
And blinded by dreams.
Nothing of beauty,
Nothing of accomplishment,
Nothing of ambition.
Nothing.
….aren`t I just a mission?
Please send me an escape route,
To escape the nightmare
That haunts me,
The nightmare addicted to me.
That craves my pain,
Licking at every drop of happiness
I have.
Make me new.
Make me whole.
Make me far from nothing,
In this place of escape.
Where I can dance in a translucent
Sky.
That rains tears of
Joy.
Make me different.
Make me happy with myself.
Copyright ©
xxbreathlessx
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2004-07-12 20:36:54]
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Re: Nothing
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by BrandySwanson on
Monday, 12th July 2004 @ 08:54:11 PM AEST
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sad and very emotional write. good job
Brandy
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Re: Nothing
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by TheVoice on
Monday, 12th July 2004 @ 08:57:58 PM AEST
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very captivating write. much to think about.
great job
the voice
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Re: Nothing
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by apollo on
Wednesday, 14th July 2004 @ 07:02:59 PM AEST
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you are a genious. do you want to be one of those? you should ! the way you describe your emotion is very true and the honesty in your words is very compelling.
brandon |
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Re: Nothing
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by northernlights on
Tuesday, 20th April 2010 @ 07:36:51 AM AEST
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| key line in this one the last one Make me happy with myself,easier said than done,as you have so eloquently described well written |
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