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How She Left
Contributed by
iluvpencils
on
Monday, 12th July 2004 @ 08:58:34 PM in AEST
Topic:
Suicide
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She left this world with slitted wrists
With anger, pain, and tight clenched fists
Her empty eyes, they see no more
Her eyes that once swa through my core
Her heart, it will no longer feel
It's agony, once wrought like steel
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2004-07-12 20:58:34]
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Re: How She Left
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by xxbreathlessx on
Monday, 12th July 2004 @ 09:01:38 PM AEST
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| well its VERY good so far..so when you add more..well let me know keep me updated! =) |
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Re: How She Left
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by Kirby on
Monday, 12th July 2004 @ 09:04:22 PM AEST
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| Great poem, sorry for your loss, this was a painful thing for you to write I bet. It's still a wonderful write. Love::::Kirby |
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Re: How She Left
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by drummerchic18 on
Monday, 12th July 2004 @ 09:16:34 PM AEST
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| awesome...indepth...purely breathtaking |
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Re: How She Left
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by WorthlesSanity666 on
Monday, 12th July 2004 @ 09:17:59 PM AEST
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| Aye, this was beautiful. I too am extremely sorry for your loss... It really hits home for me... I look forward to reading future installments. |
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Re: How She Left
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by Ceres on
Monday, 12th July 2004 @ 09:31:36 PM AEST
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VERY GOOD! I know it might be hard for you but I hope to read more from you in the future.
- Ceres |
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Re: How She Left
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by matts_sweetie_04 on
Monday, 12th July 2004 @ 10:21:10 PM AEST
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Great write! I am deeply sorry you had to go through such a loss. When you add more let me know i will be looking forward to it.
sMiLe!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! |
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Re: How She Left
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by mlcarter369 on
Tuesday, 13th July 2004 @ 03:35:47 AM AEST
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| im sorry for your loss but the fact that u can write about it is great it helps to let go and this is really good i cant wait for u to add on |
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Re: How She Left
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by deathdrop on
Tuesday, 13th July 2004 @ 05:38:26 AM AEST
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i'm sorry to hear of your loss.
great poem though...! |
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