|
 Menu
|
|
|
|
|
Social
|
|
|
|
|
Talk to me
Contributed by
Archie
on
Tuesday, 13th July 2004 @ 05:22:55 AM in AEST
Topic:
EmotionalPoetry
|
Tell me I'm not the only one hurting
Tell me you still want to be my friend
Quench the fear that threatens to unrest me.
Give me answers that I comprehend
Do not trample on the prayers I've said here
Quietly walk with me through the park
I know how I've messed up
I have not given up
What I need is for you to talk to me.
Show me love as given from the scriptures
Sing songs with me when I have success
Take me to the hieght of grandios mountains
Help me to keep changed in recklessness
Quench the temptation that e're surrounds me
Please help me to put my mind at ease
I know how I've messed up
I am sorry for what I have done
I hope though that you will talk to me.
* * * * * * * * * * * * * * * * * * * * * * * * * * * * * * * * * * * * * *
If by my actions I have hurt any one; I am sorry
My words may not be enough to erase my actions
Yet I ask that you do not withdraw from me
Forgiveness will form the ties that heal us
And our friend ship will be renewed as if I had not trespassed.
Copyright ©
Archie
... [
2004-07-13 05:22:55]
(Date/Time posted on
site)
Advertisments:
|
|
|
|
|
|
Sorry, comments are no longer allowed for anonymous, please register for a free membership to access this feature and more
|
|
All comments are owned by the poster. Your Poetry
Dot Com is not responsible for the content of any
comment.
That said, if you find an offensive comment, please
contact via the FeedBack Form with details, including poem title
etc.
|
|
|
Re: Talk to me
(User Rating: 1 )
by venkat on
Tuesday, 13th July 2004 @ 05:54:29 AM AEST
(User
Info | Send
a Message)
|
| A true heartfelt write..beautifully touching. venkat |
|
|
Re: Talk to me
(User Rating: 1 )
by little_genna on
Tuesday, 13th July 2004 @ 06:52:57 AM AEST
(User
Info | Send
a Message)
|
this is truly beautiful and full of sorrow. i do not know what you did to need the cause for forgiveness but your friend should forgive and forget. this is truly heartfelt.
much love and hugs
gen xx |
|
|
Re: Talk to me
(User Rating: 1 )
by Jenni_K on
Tuesday, 13th July 2004 @ 09:24:04 AM AEST
(User
Info | Send
a Message)
|
How could anyone not forgive you (if indeed it is warranted) after reading such a beautiful and sincere wrrite!!!
Hugs from this friend...
Jenni |
|
|
Re: Talk to me
(User Rating: 1 )
by arden on
Tuesday, 13th July 2004 @ 09:54:45 AM AEST
(User
Info | Send
a Message)
|
i agree with all the other comments, strongly agrees with jenni_ks.
this was in fact beautiful and emotional.
written nicely. i liked this.
i hope all goes well with your friend and soon.
Arden |
|
|
Re: Talk to me
(User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on
Tuesday, 13th July 2004 @ 10:32:52 AM AEST
(User
Info | Send
a Message)
|
The sincere emotion here pleads for forgiveness and I cannot imagine anyone not granting it and trying hard to understand.
Rita |
|
|
Re: Talk to me
(User Rating: 1 )
by Essentially9 on
Tuesday, 13th July 2004 @ 01:00:13 PM AEST
(User
Info | Send
a Message)
|
| very touching. another one that i can sadly relate to. acceptance of a person includes mistakes also. forgive but never forget. excellent write. =] |
|
|
Re: Talk to me
(User Rating: 1 )
by pastiche247 on
Tuesday, 17th August 2004 @ 04:06:57 PM AEST
(User
Info | Send
a Message)
|
So much pain!
So much honesty to recognize it and such bravery to publish it.
Very powerful.
Well done!
Best,
p
|
|
|
|
· 
Poetry
Community
Members
Areas
Reference
Search
Top
Others
