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Heart To Heart
Contributed by
pixie
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Tuesday, 13th July 2004 @ 05:32:08 AM in AEST
Topic:
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We had a little heart to heart,
After a row had played its part,
Lay on the bed side by side,
I talked of feelings that I normally hide.
We held each other near,
Inside our hearts was the fear,
Our hearts are made of delicate glass,
Takes awhile for the hurt to pass.
In your eyes I saw great pain,
I knew Id made you hurt again,
Wish I could crawl inside you,
& make your heart feel so brand new.
Your heart had the wrong kind of beating,
It received another unhappy greeting,
Your heart is breakable I should remember,
From January right through to December.
When we row it feels like hell,
As tears & upset inside you & I well,
I hate arguing with my special man,
I will make it up the best way I can.
I am the only one who has the key,
To either break your heart or set it free,
Im glad we had our heart to heart,
You & I are destined never to part.
Copyright ©
pixie
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2004-07-13 05:32:08]
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Re: Heart To Heart
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by lostinmyself on
Tuesday, 13th July 2004 @ 05:37:44 AM AEST
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This is sweet.
Arguments are hard aren't they, but they make a relationship strong too.
Beautiful poem Krissie
*hugs you* Phil xxx |
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Re: Heart To Heart
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by venkat on
Tuesday, 13th July 2004 @ 05:51:16 AM AEST
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| hmmmm......well written..it is beautiful. venkat |
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Re: Heart To Heart
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by little_genna on
Tuesday, 13th July 2004 @ 06:38:29 AM AEST
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pixie hunny this is so beautiful. arguments are hard yet heart to hearts help most of the time. you seem to know what you want and your love for this man is so tender and beautiful. so sweet *hugs you*
much love and hugs
gen xx |
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Re: Heart To Heart
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by Archie on
Tuesday, 13th July 2004 @ 07:39:24 AM AEST
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| Great poem, this shows the true nature of relationships. Working things out is always good. |
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Re: Heart To Heart
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by RhythmBndt on
Tuesday, 13th July 2004 @ 08:48:08 AM AEST
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| Lovely poem :) |
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Re: Heart To Heart
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by code on
Tuesday, 13th July 2004 @ 12:38:05 PM AEST
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Beautiful poem. I had to sit for a few minutes and reflect on some of my previous relationships after reading this. This poem brought some strong emotions forward. Thanks for sharing this with us!
Ant |
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Re: Heart To Heart
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by Heartfilledblood on
Wednesday, 14th July 2004 @ 01:41:40 PM AEST
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| This is a really good poem. I liked it a lot really sweet. Great write. |
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