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Faith in The Faithless
Contributed by
Ripper_Something_Unusual
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Tuesday, 13th July 2004 @ 01:48:10 PM in AEST
Topic:
psychoticpoems
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I wiped the blood from my face and smiled,
Each one of my teeth crooked in their own way,
A rusty needle in my arm,
Infecting me with charm,
Making me feel like god,
While making me feel like *****.
The raindrops never seemed so big,
The blooddrops never seemed so few in quantity,
This is it,
I am a pariah elevated to a higher plane,
Its almost as if im jesus,
Denying my own crucifiction,
Ive turned my cross upside down,
In my neo-apocalyptic mindset,
Revenge is best served red hot and with a touch of ambiguity,
The revolution is coming,
Your religion is crashing down,
Have faith in the faithless,
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2004-07-13 13:48:10]
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Re: Faith in The Faithless
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by pixie on
Tuesday, 13th July 2004 @ 01:51:09 PM AEST
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wow that was differnt, i really liked it :) and it didnt offend atall
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Re: Faith in The Faithless
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by Putteragain on
Tuesday, 13th July 2004 @ 02:07:32 PM AEST
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i have been there my self and have found My real God what a ride i related to every word life is a struggle but it can be over come
thanks for the reminder
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Re: Faith in The Faithless
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by Former_Member on
Sunday, 18th July 2004 @ 10:07:22 AM AEST
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The best poem I've read of your four so far. Its full of powerful words and euphemisms (?). I won't bother quoting them, as I'm sure someone with the appropriate stick will wave it. Nice ideas and well worked.
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