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Metamorphosis
Contributed by
ladyfawn
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Thursday, 11th July 2002 @ 06:51:38 AM in AEST
Topic:
Lifepoems
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Signatures By
The Tired Lion
Once a very long time ago-
I wrote about a catalyst
Spoken were words of optimism
And aspiration of times yet told.
Life was full of tea and wine
Filled with happiness and time
Easy was it to tell of butterflies
Aforetime entered metamorphosis.
I was young and full of dreams
Heart full of romantisim's scenes
When did it become a trail to follow
Life was then lived for tomorrow.
Enchanting metamorphosis of life
Has crushed my dreams; has broke my heart
When did it all break ground to die
And when was my last happy sigh ?
Now past; just another story complete
The paths all taken by the feet
All the roads have now been followed
Rusted, Wasted... Now on to dreams of
Tomorrow !!!
Copyright ladyfawn 2001
Copyright ©
ladyfawn
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2002-07-11 06:51:38]
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Re: Metamorphosis
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by Chrissie on
Thursday, 11th July 2002 @ 07:15:54 AM AEST
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Dearest Nessa,
Beautiful writing....so poignant and with a wistful air. I do love your style.
Much love
Chrissie
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Re: Metamorphosis
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by S_K_Williamson on
Thursday, 11th July 2002 @ 01:15:39 PM AEST
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Nessa,
You write with such grace. This is beautifuly sad ....and yet looks toward the future.
Great write my friend,
Sharon;) |
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Re: Metamorphosis
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by humphdj on
Tuesday, 16th July 2002 @ 12:41:15 AM AEST
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Enchanting............like the whisper of a fairie.
Rgds
Dave |
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Re: Metamorphosis
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by princesspurty on
Monday, 26th August 2002 @ 06:18:29 AM AEST
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| beautiful words and sad to a point, but there is hope of a better tomorrow |
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Re: Metamorphosis
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by wordsy on
Sunday, 29th December 2002 @ 10:25:27 AM AEST
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Forgotten tears of long past years
still dance up in my dreams
To fill my mind with sadness
as tomorrow it still leams.
A well worded piece,
wordsy. |
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Re: Metamorphosis
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by senorwoohoo on
Sunday, 26th January 2003 @ 06:39:11 PM AEST
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| Very great poem right here, great job! Thank you for commenting on my poetry as well. Keep up the good work! :o) |
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Re: Metamorphosis
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by karoody on
Friday, 7th February 2003 @ 11:41:29 PM AEST
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| you have one of the biggest and strongest hearts I have ever seen...keep it up. you have an awesome writing style. |
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Re: Metamorphosis
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by Keatsdogg on
Friday, 21st February 2003 @ 01:39:44 PM AEST
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| I like this poem. well written. |
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Re: Metamorphosis
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by Feelin_Like_A_SadFellow on
Wednesday, 12th March 2003 @ 09:21:46 PM AEST
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| i like the expressions |
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Re: Metamorphosis
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by wyrd_faerie on
Friday, 30th May 2003 @ 05:13:10 PM AEST
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| aah...this is beautiful... |
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Re: Metamorphosis
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by twinkletoes on
Wednesday, 3rd March 2004 @ 07:17:30 PM AEST
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just thought I might come back to your older ones and have a read. i am so glad i did so ness, this is beautiful. your writing has an old-world fairytale quality about it, i can actually hear a person like kate blanchard or liv tyler reading them aloud in a movie voice-over. words escape this classic yobbo.
Twinkletoes! |
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Re: Metamorphosis
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by Kie on
Tuesday, 9th March 2004 @ 02:45:28 PM AEST
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| This just grabbed my thoughts. The path seems to keep changing in life but it never seems to go back to the good ole days or the time of beautiful butterflies and sunshine. It makes me wonder what I will morph into with time. Enjoyed this one alot Ness. Kie |
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Re: Metamorphosis
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by Cynthia on
Saturday, 15th May 2004 @ 01:46:20 PM AEST
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| Oh Nessa, this is beautiful. Truly creative. *S* Cynthia |
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Re: Metamorphosis
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by Alovinmann on
Wednesday, 15th September 2004 @ 04:26:54 PM AEST
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| You have a unique style a lot like my own! |
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Re: Metamorphosis
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by the_Ghost_Moth on
Monday, 2nd May 2005 @ 11:16:25 PM AEST
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Classic Nessa.
I've never seen this before,
I'm glad I looked for it.
Butterflies...
they get all the attention.
--Ghosty Moth |
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Re: Metamorphosis
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by hray42 on
Sunday, 27th April 2014 @ 04:25:41 PM AEST
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| You have been so gracious to me on your your comments.. Now it is my turn.. I have gone back to your poetic beginning.. At least on here.. I did really like this poem.. It feels much like a butterfly and it's metamorphosis.. Captured (no pun) well.. Take care... |
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Re: Metamorphosis
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by deadreckoning1983 on
Monday, 24th November 2014 @ 04:27:59 AM AEST
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Life was full of tea and wine indeed...
What a great ending too. the paths are all walked so now its time to make or find new ones. I loved this write. and glad you have written it. |
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