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left broken
Contributed by
torn_skirt
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Tuesday, 13th July 2004 @ 04:30:54 PM in AEST
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Never knowing when to quit-
its one of the things i do best.
Thats my job.
When im not im my shift, Im the lonley doorknob.
waiting.
wanting to be used by the next person that throws the slightest amount of attention my way.
But to much use, eventually leads to being broken.
Im now the handle that lays on the floor next to where you all walk, day by day.
waiting.
wanting to be fixed.
But no one takes the time to fix a broken girl.
Once a broken girl, is an eternity of being broken.
Maybe repaired for a short time, but never as good as you were when you were new.
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torn_skirt
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2004-07-13 16:30:54]
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Re: left broken
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by lostinmyself on
Tuesday, 13th July 2004 @ 04:36:32 PM AEST
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I understand this totally. I can relate alot.
I feel 'broken' too.
The only thing we can do is fix ourselves.
Dont worry, one day you will get what you deserve.
good write.
*hugs* Phil xxx |
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Re: left broken
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by purplestary on
Tuesday, 13th July 2004 @ 04:39:48 PM AEST
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| very well expressed...sad but good write. there's nothing in this world that can fix a broken girl except the girl herself. just stay positive through life and look at all the good things and don't dwell on bad or the past. sooner or later it will lift off your shoulders..it could take a long time....but it is true that time can heal the worst of wounds. |
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Re: left broken
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by purplestary on
Tuesday, 13th July 2004 @ 04:41:19 PM AEST
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| had to read it again. this is truly a great write. just hang in there..if you need to talk to anyone i'm here. |
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Re: left broken
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by evilfairy on
Tuesday, 13th July 2004 @ 07:16:09 PM AEST
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very sad :(
you've written so well....it's not what i was expecting but i really enjoyed your poem.
i love the line "but no one takes the time to fix a broken girl'. :( i hope you find someone who can cherish you and nurse you back to health.... |
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