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One More Impression To Soothe the Depression
Contributed by
2ndChance
on
Tuesday, 13th July 2004 @ 08:08:38 PM in AEST
Topic:
Suicide
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One more impression,
to soothe the depression.
One more time,
its not a crime.
Living in pain,
waiting to be slain.
The left and the right,
show me no light.
Leave me no choice,
strip me of my voice.
Take it out on my arm,
doing no one any harm.
This is my release,
watch the crimson increase.
Don't try to fix me,
This is how I become free.
A silver knife,
to end a life.
Just one more impression,
to soothe the depression.
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2ndChance
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2004-07-13 20:08:38]
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Re: One More Impression To Soothe the Depression
(User Rating: 1 )
by kori31 on
Tuesday, 13th July 2004 @ 10:19:56 PM AEST
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| I liked that ...........smooth flow......the pain within your words is clear....great write |
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Re: One More Impression To Soothe the Depression
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by Live2Die on
Sunday, 24th October 2004 @ 12:50:08 AM AEST
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Take it out on my arm,
doing no one any harm.
I am sorry to say you do do people harm. I am one of them. I know why you do...but that does not mean it doesn't hurt people when you do. Thank god you finally told me the TRUTH tho. Great poem K@, I really loved it. |
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