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Failure to Escape the Noise of Life
Contributed by
forgottensorrow
on
Tuesday, 13th July 2004 @ 08:47:58 PM in AEST
Topic:
Lifepoems
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I go outside to escape the noise
Only to find more than I had before
The birds they chirp
Not like the singing melodic kind
but instead like an aggravating alarm clock
The noises from a busy street
of cars passing by
Hearing some motors that are far from silent
Dogs barking at passerbys
The bass of a loud car stereo
The wind rustling in the trees
A plane flying high
Then there's little distractions
Too much to see, to take in
That is usually ignored
Watching everything go on
Life happening
Only to know that soon there'll be an end
The leaves, the flowers, the grass
Soon to be gone by autumns call
Followed by winters blanket
That chills us all
Then the warmth of springs breath
Watching life happen again and again
Maybe theres not an end
But another chance to live
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forgottensorrow
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2004-07-13 20:47:58]
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Re: Failure to Escape the Noise of Life
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by TheVoice on
Tuesday, 13th July 2004 @ 09:25:19 PM AEST
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i like where i hike in the mountains, only the occasional bird or the leaves in the trees. it is so peaceful.
great write.
the voice
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Re: Failure to Escape the Noise of Life
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by nexxa on
Tuesday, 13th July 2004 @ 10:42:09 PM AEST
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I really liked this poem thank you for that:)
At first I was thinking that is how I feel when looking for peace and quiet and I can not find it anywhere even the birds annoy me lol but in the end life comes full circle as does your poem and I loved it look forward to reading more
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