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Wells of Tears
Contributed by
jillian_f006
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Tuesday, 13th July 2004 @ 09:59:19 PM in AEST
Topic:
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I dont know how to get the things out I need to say
I need help and I know that
There are people who are reaching out to me
I try to reach back but I fall short
I fall into the pit of failure
Where I all to often find myself
Its not like I dont try
So dont say that
I dont want to fail
I need to succeed
I need to find someone who I can just open up to
When I look deep down, the light is out
I cant stand myself and I wont anymore
Too many people just dont understand
You tell me to talk
But you dont really want to listen
I just want to be in a world where I can be me
I need to love myself and before anything else
This world has too many rules and too many standards
Where can I go?
Who can help me?
Im not gonna kill myself
Yes Im damn close
But that would mean all the b*tch*s in my life would win
They took control of me and waited for this day
I have to be strong but I need a little help
I said this before and it still stands
I need to be me
And thats all there is
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jillian_f006
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2004-07-13 21:59:19]
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Re: Wells of Tears
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by farmtowngirl on
Wednesday, 14th July 2004 @ 12:15:21 AM AEST
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Wow.....wow thats all i can say this has hit me deep. i know how ur feeling except i found my place to be me but unfortently its not school its church. i really hope u can find a place to be yourself!
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Re: Wells of Tears
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by Jenni_K on
Wednesday, 14th July 2004 @ 12:47:24 AM AEST
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This is really sad, but well written.....hope you get the help you need.....
Hugs
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Re: Wells of Tears
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by Puppy_dog_eyes on
Wednesday, 28th July 2004 @ 07:34:32 AM AEST
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Don't be afraid to reach out again, you will find that someone to ease your burden.
You are right, you need to find a way to love yourself, but sometimes it takes help to reach that point.
Feel free to message me if you wish
steve |
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