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A Way To Explain It
Contributed by
lilmissy086
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Wednesday, 14th July 2004 @ 02:32:21 AM in AEST
Topic:
Lifepoems
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I cant explain this feeling
When I look up at the ceiling
I love you so much
And I love when we touch
We talk about making love
You are my angel from above
I dont know how to explain this
But I love the way you kiss
Ive been thinking maybe
I wanna have a baby
I know I am still at such a young age
And babies can give a lot of rage
They can be a lot of pain
But I believe that baby would keep me sane
I am ready to take this big step
Thinking of the memories weve kept
I know what the future brings
It brings nothing but good things
I dont know what you would say
Or if you would run away
But all I know is I want a baby
And I was thinking maybe
We could make one
Cause I really want a son
BrownEyedTears06: If not a son than a baby girl
She could be our world
Baby, I love you so much
And I love when we touch
So what do you say
Please dont run away
I dont mean to make such a fright
Just please be with me tonight
If you dont want a baby
Than we could just maybe
Make the sweetest love
Cause you are my angel from above
Im sorry to say this
But I love the way you kiss
So what do you say
Or do you want to wait until another day
Please just hold me tight
And say youll make love to me tonight
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Re: A Way To Explain It
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by RobertKilpatrick on
Wednesday, 14th July 2004 @ 02:34:40 AM AEST
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Good rhyme: nice write
Cheers Robert. |
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Re: A Way To Explain It
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by Archie on
Wednesday, 14th July 2004 @ 04:05:50 AM AEST
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| Nice poem very emotional it seems. |
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Re: A Way To Explain It
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by Former_Member on
Wednesday, 14th July 2004 @ 05:00:26 AM AEST
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As long as your 'such a young age' is legal, then the choice is yours.
Good luck. |
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Re: A Way To Explain It
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by buccaneer on
Wednesday, 14th July 2004 @ 07:00:22 AM AEST
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i guess you have just given me the right answers to my problems and i will tell you more if only she agrees.
this is lovely. |
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Re: A Way To Explain It
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by Asatru on
Wednesday, 14th July 2004 @ 07:14:16 AM AEST
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| Yes, your poem does rhyme well. Nice write. Keep writing. |
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Re: A Way To Explain It
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by Kie on
Wednesday, 14th July 2004 @ 09:03:43 AM AEST
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After reading your author's notes I wasn't sure I wanted to read your poem bec. normally if someone specifically asks I tend to shy away from that person.
But I was impressed with your poem and I thought the rhyming was excellent.
I hope all your dreams come true. : )
Kie |
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