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Kiss
Contributed by
jonteD
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Wednesday, 14th July 2004 @ 05:39:26 AM in AEST
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LovePoetry
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What is this?
This gentle kiss,
Lips touch,
Means so much.
Electric feel,
Not quite real,
Body awakes,
Begins to shake.
Eyes smile,
Breath gone awhile,
Heart be still,
Because this is real.
Want more,
Start to adore,
What is this?
The first kiss.
Copyright ©
jonteD
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2004-07-14 05:39:26]
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Re: Kiss
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by Jenni_K on
Wednesday, 14th July 2004 @ 11:09:59 AM AEST
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Hmmm...I wonder!!
Lovely, Jon...
Hugs
Jenni |
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Re: Kiss
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by Overstated on
Sunday, 15th August 2004 @ 02:15:47 PM AEST
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| nice piece with good use of rhyming cuplets. Very well done! |
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Re: Kiss
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by a_bear on
Friday, 15th October 2004 @ 04:48:18 PM AEST
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don't hesitate
say it's great! |
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