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What If?
Contributed by
pixie
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Wednesday, 14th July 2004 @ 09:32:41 AM in AEST
Topic:
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In time you get bored,
You feel I should be ignored,
What if I cant please you anymore,
Would you ever walk out the door?
Someone better comes along?
Would you ever do me wrong,
What if I make you mad,
Will you leave me & feel glad.
I lose my good looks,
Will you try & wriggle off my hook,
And seek out someone better,
Will I even find a dear John letter?
You realise Im no good,
That youve been with a dud,
Feel the need to finally get rid,
And a wholesome goodbye you bid.
You lose your love for me,
Spread your wings & fly free,
Refuse to pick up the phone.
Leave me here all alone
Copyright ©
pixie
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2004-07-14 09:32:41]
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Re: What If?
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by Former_Member on
Wednesday, 14th July 2004 @ 10:14:14 AM AEST
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This is a form of wonder that we all go through. Find in yourself all the beauty you hold and share it with Mark. Let him see the beauty and he'll come around. (not physical beauty) Inner! He'll see it! Good luck Krissee..
angel always...godspeed...joni |
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Re: What If?
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by _Raspberry_ on
Wednesday, 14th July 2004 @ 10:18:29 AM AEST
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I think all that have ever loved someone have had these fears before. This is a good write.
Love doesn't just sit there, like a stone. It has to be made like bread, remade all the time, made new.
~Ursula K. Leguin
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Re: What If?
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by carmen_queasy on
Wednesday, 14th July 2004 @ 11:32:09 AM AEST
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| I love the way it has a hard edge to it right until the last line. judging from your poetry, it sounds as if you have nothing to worry about when it comes to Mark :) Hope it all works out |
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Re: What If?
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by mlcarter369 on
Wednesday, 14th July 2004 @ 03:20:24 PM AEST
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| NICE POEM SORRY ABOUT UR PROBLEMS HOPE IT WORKS OUT |
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Re: What If?
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by liquidsunshine on
Wednesday, 14th July 2004 @ 06:28:49 PM AEST
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You're extremely victorious in expressing your insecurities.
I know how that goes, but I don't think I could say it like you can.
Lots of love and peace be with you,
Chelsea |
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Re: What If?
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by Jenni_K on
Thursday, 15th July 2004 @ 06:27:46 AM AEST
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You have a great way of expressing yourself...... Keep it up....
Jenni |
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Re: What If?
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by little_genna on
Friday, 16th July 2004 @ 11:20:16 AM AEST
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Pixie this is beautiful. it show's your scared and how much you love mark. He will see your inner beauty when you grow old. He is a very lucky man to have you love him.
peace be with you
Gen xx |
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