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Cry for an Embrace
Contributed by
liquidsunshine
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Wednesday, 14th July 2004 @ 12:19:04 PM in AEST
Topic:
hbadday
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Silently I weep
I weep and a tear lolls down my cheek
My cheek is damp with pain
Pain guides another tear to slide near my nose
My nose is dripping with tears still more of which cling to my eyelashes
My eyelashes are sopping and the makeup runs
The makeup runs and my arms recoil
Recoil and retract and my hands grasp my shoulders
My shoulders feel harsh heaviness
Heaviness that lies upon me with all might
With all might I stand up and go step by step
Step by step, I go through my day
Through my day, the heaviness sets in deeper
The heaviness sets in deeper and I need an embrace
I need an embrace as I sit on the bench
As I sit on the bench, I read a book
I read a book in the sunlight
The sunlight gives the warm illusion of an embrace
The warm illusion of an embrace is almost all I need
All I need is a hug
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Re: Cry for an Embrace
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by pixie on
Wednesday, 14th July 2004 @ 12:25:10 PM AEST
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*hugs you*
I have been having avery bad week, feeling very, angry, very sad and very depressed. my head is up my bum lolol
you have expressed your frustraion and upset well,
takecare
pixie xx |
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Re: Cry for an Embrace
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by katyqueen35 on
Wednesday, 14th July 2004 @ 12:41:12 PM AEST
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Awwww you poor thing...
gives liquidsunshine a big hug... |
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Re: Cry for an Embrace
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by Former_Member on
Wednesday, 14th July 2004 @ 02:33:01 PM AEST
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Big huge hugs to you. But remember one thing. It is only a ticket and will not change world events. Just try harder not to get them, but don't drag yourself down because of it.
Hugs and smiles,
Rita |
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Re: Cry for an Embrace
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by xxbreathlessx on
Thursday, 15th July 2004 @ 02:59:18 PM AEST
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| ah! i loved this! it was awesome, i can relate to it, you did an awesome job! |
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Re: Cry for an Embrace
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by lostinmyself on
Friday, 16th July 2004 @ 01:05:29 PM AEST
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*hugs Chelsea bun*
Awww hun, i understand.
I agree with Jarred, loads of detail here.
Great write.
I understand.
*hugs* Phil |
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Re: Cry for an Embrace
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by bobotheclown on
Friday, 16th July 2004 @ 06:28:15 PM AEST
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yes, cops can be a-holes, but then again so can I. Good poem I liked how you repeated different words... very effective i thought. Once again a good poem.
Bobo (joel) |
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Re: Cry for an Embrace
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by eatfresh22 on
Wednesday, 18th August 2004 @ 05:32:41 PM AEST
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I like the connection and the flow. Greatly and creatively written. If only states didn't separate us, Chelsea! A warm word of love is the best hug I can give you now, sorry. I love you.
~Carrie~ |
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