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Cries For Babe
Contributed by
Lia
on
Friday, 25th October 2002 @ 05:15:00 PM in AEST
Topic:
SadPoetry
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A breathless sigh creeps out from her lungs
...What have I done? (What have you done?)...
Her royal blue eyes peek around the chipped plaster wall
...Am I to blame? (Are you to blame?)...
Blood stain sinks into the carpet at her feet
...Can I hide? (Should I hide?)...
A whimper slips from your tear soaked lips
..May I cry? (Can I cry?)...
A golden band falls from his strong hands
...Could I run? (Should I run?)...
His worthless tears fall from his eyes
...Will I care? (Did you care?)...
Three tears fall and meet on the floor
...Should I pray? (Pray to God?)...
One for the monster, one for the babe, the third for a broken soul
...Can I forgive? (Let you live?)...
Wipe your tears you grizzly man, you look just like a fool
...Can I scream? (Should I scream?)...
Wipe your tears dear broken one, in time your wounds will heal
...Will you stay? (May I stay?)...
Cry your tears sweet little one, let the hurt be known
..Can you hear me? (Will you hear me?)...
Copyright ©
Lia
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2002-10-25 17:15:00]
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Re: Cries For Babe
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by LOWMAN613 on
Friday, 25th October 2002 @ 10:54:08 PM AEST
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| I realy liked this,another good write! Christina |
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Re: Cries For Babe
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by Chicken on
Saturday, 26th October 2002 @ 02:46:02 AM AEST
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| That was an awesome write |
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Re: Cries For Babe
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by nebill on
Saturday, 26th October 2002 @ 03:05:08 AM AEST
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| WHEW! |
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Re: Cries For Babe
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by Justice3310 on
Saturday, 26th October 2002 @ 03:11:00 AM AEST
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| Great write...........justice |
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Re: Cries For Babe
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by viola on
Saturday, 26th October 2002 @ 06:28:23 PM AEST
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| wow, this is fantastic. |
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Re: Cries For Babe
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by Valerie_Pearson on
Friday, 1st November 2002 @ 03:51:02 AM AEST
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| Great write Lia, ....... and one more tear from me to you, I'm glad you write the words so true, |
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Re: Cries For Babe
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by The_Phantom on
Wednesday, 13th November 2002 @ 08:49:11 AM AEST
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Wow, I don't know what to say, outstanding, great write.
The Phantom |
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Re: Cries For Babe
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by WordPoet on
Wednesday, 20th November 2002 @ 03:44:01 AM AEST
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I don't know how you managed to write the words at all... This poem is frightening and sad where the "babe" is concerned. My God is all I can say..
Doug |
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