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arguements
Contributed by
shorty_52
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Wednesday, 14th July 2004 @ 03:28:52 PM in AEST
Topic:
fictional
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every night at eight o'clock we start to hear them yell we turn out the lights and up the tv and hope to outselves that they will let eachother be.
and every night it's always the same the yellings gets louder soon it'll turn to screams.
but then one night it was so quiet we wondered if everyone was ok.
then to our horror a gun shot was heard and everyone just started to scream.
my dad gor up and looked out the window while mama called the cops.
they sent me to bed were i couldn't sleep and stared at the ceilling and thought.
why would they do that kill someone so kind maybe someone just lost their mind.
that's when i got scared i saw someone pase by it wasn't my dad for he was still inside.
then at that moment my eyes shot open sweat streaming down my face.
i go into the bathroom and get a drink and that's when i hear a shot.
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Re: arguements
(User Rating: 1 ) by Heartfilledblood on
Wednesday, 14th July 2004 @ 03:53:17 PM AEST (User
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Thats creepy. Great poem babe :) |
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Re: arguements
(User Rating: 1 ) by lostinmyself on
Wednesday, 14th July 2004 @ 04:12:21 PM AEST (User
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Hmmmm my neighbours argue like this.
Scary thought.
Good write.
Phil xxx |
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Re: arguements
(User Rating: 1 ) by Vermillion on
Thursday, 15th July 2004 @ 06:27:04 AM AEST (User
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what a very mind jarring poem.the end gives ya chills
great write.
~vermillion~ |
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Re: arguements
(User Rating: 1 ) by Trisha on
Tuesday, 20th July 2004 @ 04:25:06 PM AEST (User
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This Was Good But Sad |
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