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Fly
Contributed by
danimus
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Wednesday, 14th July 2004 @ 06:11:43 PM in AEST
Topic:
fictional
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If a bird had flown as far as it could
Would it die to know
As far as he has gone
He doesn't know where he's flown
Fly me off
Where I want to go
So annoyed with my own grief
But would I know where to go?
If I were a bird of strength
I'd hold my place of happiness
Undermind all my flaws
And beautify my nest
Wait, forgive
I don't want to fly
Clip my wings
And I will live sometime
Bid me your weather
And I'd stand still
Still enough to feel the pain
But live willingly
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2004-07-14 18:11:43]
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Re: Fly
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by apollo on
Wednesday, 14th July 2004 @ 07:00:48 PM AEST
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the way you write your poetry is quite unique., it is far better than another simple rhyme poem, very unique and well done.
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