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a travel to the holy land
Contributed by
Jan_Oskar_Hansen
on
Friday, 25th October 2002 @ 07:30:00 PM in AEST
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A Travel To The Holy Land
If you are not quiet Ill put you in
a straight jacket the hospital dressed,
enormous male nurse said.
But I dont belong here this is a mad
house so you think youre normal
then? Yes! Walking around
Jerusalem claiming that you are God?
For Marys sake I was drunk that day
The nurse had a gigantic syringe in his
hand full of yellow poison which he
stabbed through my heart. The room
swivelled around like a kaleidoscopic
twister. When I came to I sat on a comfy
carpet and twelve men listened attentively
as I outlined the future of man. Flying home,
from the holy land, the nurse was so scared
that I had to hold his hand while thinking
that I would look out of place in winter
cold London.
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2002-10-25 19:30:00]
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Re: a travel to the holy land
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by Baby_Blu-XTC on
Saturday, 9th November 2002 @ 07:58:20 AM AEST
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| very unique.keep wrtin. |
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Re: a travel to the holy land
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by AllAlone on
Thursday, 14th November 2002 @ 08:24:06 AM AEST
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| it really ket me interested but it left me questioning what happened. way to keep the reader interested |
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Re: a travel to the holy land
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by AllAlone on
Thursday, 14th November 2002 @ 08:24:26 AM AEST
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| it really kept me interested but it left me questioning what happened. way to keep the reader interested |
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Re: a travel to the holy land
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by Unaekseveer1 on
Friday, 15th November 2002 @ 10:03:07 AM AEST
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This reminded me of 'One Flew Over The Cuckoos Nest' Jan!
I had to read it twice, but I think I understood what you're saying or not, a very interesting tale, which I like very much.
With love
Dean:-)
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