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Enough
Contributed by
kimmany
on
Wednesday, 14th July 2004 @ 11:43:15 PM in AEST
Topic:
LostLove
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You told me I was amazing..
not amazing enough
You told me I was beautiful..
not beautiful enough
You told me youd never lie to me..
you did
You told me youd never hurt me..
you lied
I thought you were wonderful..
wonderful enough
I thought I could trust you with my heart..
but now that youve broken it
I cant deny..
I still love you
I feel deep down..
I hate you
And that should be enough
Copyright ©
kimmany
... [
2004-07-14 23:43:15]
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Re: Enough
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by yelhsa on
Wednesday, 14th July 2004 @ 11:58:15 PM AEST
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this is a really good poem kim....andy is a real jerk to realize what he's missing..you can do so much better, dont worry hun...there are more fish in the sea lol...i love you!
hugz,
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Re: Enough
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by arden on
Thursday, 15th July 2004 @ 12:12:11 AM AEST
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*agrees with comment above*
there are alot of other guys out there. just takes awhile to find the right one.
i like how its written. a style i havent seen used much, so it makes a very interesting read. but sad and emotional. i liked it.
keep it up. 5 stars
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Re: Enough
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by Jenni_K on
Thursday, 15th July 2004 @ 01:34:43 AM AEST
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I also agree...Time to go 'fishing'!!
Welcome to YPDC...the best poetry site on the net...
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