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Sour Flowers
Contributed by
xxwagsxx
on
Thursday, 15th July 2004 @ 04:40:32 AM in AEST
Topic:
EmotionalPoetry
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Cans piled up all over my room
Tell the story of my life thus far and reflect the build up inside my head
My room paints a picture of my scorched personality
Clothes lay in shambles on my floor
The stress of this mess is too much too look at
I would kill for the answers to these problems but instead Ill keep quiet
and search for a solution inside my mind
I sit and ponder to many things at my computer
My thoughts are a mess of mixed emotions from all sides of the brain
Im hoping to make since of something
I am stuck in this 4 wall place with endless possibilities inside of me
A sole longing to get out.
Out of this place I know all too well
Im the cause of my emotional battles.
I repeat myself too much and comprehend things beyond the level of normal
So many memories I wish I would have written down
And so many I wish I could tare apart.
My reflection is someone I dont even know
Someone that I wish I wasnt
How do I find my places in this mess of a world
Everyday is always a new fight
The few days when there isnt are the ones you WANT to remember.
My sour flowers are wasted and not heard
Im never good enough
and I never will be.
Copyright ©
xxwagsxx
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2004-07-15 04:40:32]
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Re: Sour Flowers
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by TheOneAgain on
Thursday, 15th July 2004 @ 05:06:59 AM AEST
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| This is a very in-depth look at raw emotion...I'm very glad you decided to share this with us...excellent write. |
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Re: Sour Flowers
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by whitt on
Saturday, 27th November 2010 @ 11:01:19 PM AEST
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| your poem is deep and beautiful :) i can relate to it ... specially the last three lines |
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