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My Greatest Loss
Contributed by
Bruce
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Thursday, 15th July 2004 @ 10:19:09 AM in AEST
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goodbyepoetry
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My Greatest Loss
Help me carry on
as I go through the rest of my life
Having lost my precious darling
my tender loving wife
She was more than just a wife
she was my best friend as well
How difficult it is
to have to say farewell
There are no possible words
to tell you what I feel
The desperation I have inside
my terrible pain, so real
When I awake in the morning
or go to bed at night
The longing that I have
such a horrible fright
I hope and pray each moment
that this feeling will pass away
That she will lay content
forever and a day
Copyright ©
Bruce
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2004-07-15 10:19:09]
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Re: My Greatest Loss
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by 13Hopes on
Thursday, 15th July 2004 @ 10:37:46 AM AEST
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I hope you get through your time of sadness...
We do not remember days we remember moments...
Cheers,
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Re: My Greatest Loss
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by Kie-Kie on
Thursday, 15th July 2004 @ 11:09:12 AM AEST
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*crys* I'm so sorry for you, No one should have to suffer this pain...*hugs* let me know if there's any way I can help...
My condolences,
~Kie-Kie~ |
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Re: My Greatest Loss
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by pixie on
Thursday, 15th July 2004 @ 12:06:05 PM AEST
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I am really sorry for your loss *hugs you* time is a great healer, as each day comes you eill become stronger.... beautifully written, yet very sad...
pixie xx |
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Re: My Greatest Loss
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by shelby on
Thursday, 15th July 2004 @ 12:54:51 PM AEST
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Bruce
Im so sorry about this (hugs) Im around if you need to talk and know that Im here for you always.
Michelle |
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Re: My Greatest Loss
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by Former_Member on
Thursday, 15th July 2004 @ 06:39:58 PM AEST
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She lives on in the brush of memories you hold of her.She lingers in all the scents you have of her. She may not be with you physically, but she is with you eternally.
God bless you amid your grieving days.
Angel always...joni |
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Re: My Greatest Loss
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by Jenni_K on
Friday, 16th July 2004 @ 01:17:41 PM AEST
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Oh Bruce...I am terribly sorry for your loss.... I cannot begin to imagine the loss and pain you feel. I know there is nothing that can be said to comfort you, but I hope that knowing that you have friends who care will mean something to you...
Hugs and best wishes...
Jenni |
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Re: My Greatest Loss
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by ladyfawn on
Monday, 19th July 2004 @ 12:41:18 AM AEST
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this is so beautiful, such a loving tribute, and i read your heart loud and clear, i lost my mate too and life has never been the same.... hugs n' love nessa
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