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The key
Contributed by
loopylou
on
Thursday, 15th July 2004 @ 02:32:59 PM in AEST
Topic:
Lifepoems
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Pushing pulling
dreaming away
I dont know where i stand
Im just in a daze
take this part of me
I offer willingly
freedom I dont need
I just want you to accept me
why am I never enough?
why do you always feel the need to compare?
Im stronger when your away
but my denial
makes me weak
and now you even invading my sleep
I know this cant go on
eventually I will fall
and all will fall with me
including the secret life
and all the misleads
left behind
I want to be this person
but just without the urge
so Im not so transparent
yet always heard!
I tried giving p so many times
yet your never quite out of my sight
I know that Im clever on the inside
the side people never see
Ive just got to find the key
to expressing me!
Copyright ©
loopylou
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2004-07-15 14:32:59]
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Re: The key
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by Former_Member on
Thursday, 15th July 2004 @ 03:00:55 PM AEST
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I think your poetry is one form of expressing "you" that works very well.
Nicely done in conveying who "you" are!
Keep up the good work!
Angel always...joni |
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Re: The key
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by _Raspberry_ on
Thursday, 15th July 2004 @ 03:52:47 PM AEST
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| I really think you have found quite the key here. This is a great write! |
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Re: The key
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by Ryoko on
Thursday, 15th July 2004 @ 04:14:14 PM AEST
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| this is great! and dont worry you are enough! i love your form of dark poetry...expressing yourself...tis good! |
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Re: The key
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by Archie on
Thursday, 15th July 2004 @ 04:52:35 PM AEST
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| Just be you then and don't let other people interpret you, it only leads to heartache. |
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