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I Love You
Contributed by
CrimsonTears
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Thursday, 15th July 2004 @ 04:49:00 PM in AEST
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I should tell you that I love you
But I dont think you would care
I dont know maybe Im wrong
But I dont want to take the chance and share
So I think Ill just hold it in
It wont do any good
If I told you, it wouldnt matter
You would never love me like you should
See, you have another girl right now
I guess shes better than me
But that is no surprise
Because honestly I agree
Shes not going to mess up like I did
She wont just leave you sad and blue
I made a big mistake
Im sorry for what I put you through
I just wish you saw
The pain that this has caused me
Maybe then you would change your mind
Maybe that would be the key
Copyright ©
CrimsonTears
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2004-07-15 16:49:00]
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Re: I Love You
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by pixie on
Thursday, 15th July 2004 @ 04:54:20 PM AEST
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Awww I am sorry to hear this., i lost my first love and never thought I would or could love again, but I am now very much in love... with time you will find another love.... great write, very heart felt.
pixie xx |
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Re: I Love You
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by frozenfire on
Thursday, 15th July 2004 @ 05:20:47 PM AEST
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| Wow, this was incredible..keep it up! |
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Re: I Love You
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by brokenwings on
Thursday, 15th July 2004 @ 06:21:26 PM AEST
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i feel you cannot love the way you should until you know how to lose.. very beautiful write... everyone makes a mistake just learn from it and move on..
tasha |
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Re: I Love You
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by mysterious15 on
Thursday, 15th July 2004 @ 07:09:25 PM AEST
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I liked this. Ive felt like this before when my ex boyfriend went out with another girl and i still loved him A LOT.. i can relate very much. yep. very good. keep writing:)
*much love*
xo
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Re: I Love You
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by lonely_kakashi on
Thursday, 15th July 2004 @ 08:07:05 PM AEST
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Hey we all love and lose at some point in ours lives, me, for example, I made the worst mistake i could ever make over a year ago now, when i broke up with my ex girlfriend, a mistake that has come back kicked me in the butt on more than one occasion, IF you still love him tell him! but no doubt he is still hurting and may reject you at first but keep at it and if he does really feel the same way it will show itself at some point, hopefully it wont be too late, like it seems to be for me! But then the choice is yours, just dont take the 'whats the point' point of you, please! I know of 2 people who do that and it REALLY annoys me! lol anyway, if it doesnt work out, good luck in the future!
Yours Stupidly
Kakashi
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P.S Sorry its so damn long! lol |
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Re: I Love You
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by Broken_Skin on
Sunday, 1st August 2004 @ 07:44:27 AM AEST
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Now, my boyfriends ex did the exact same thing
fell back in love with him
it tore me to shreds
to think another could be loving him
just be careful
i advise you to get over this boy
nothing good will become of it
you will just torture yourself
like you are doing in this poem
BS x
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