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Tightrope
Contributed by
luinil
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Thursday, 15th July 2004 @ 05:34:27 PM in AEST
Topic:
Lifepoems
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Ascend the ladder once again
Spectators watch you prepare
Close your eyes; let a calming breath in
Menacing cord stretched though air
Remember this walk youve taken before
Never reaching safety
Faltering, falling, wind, scream, floor
Audience laughs at your frailty
Encouraging smile waits across the rope
To greet your crossings end
Release your hold, step out and hope
Youll live to fall again.
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luinil
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2004-07-15 17:34:27]
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Re: Tightrope
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by Archie on
Thursday, 15th July 2004 @ 05:40:07 PM AEST
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| This is a great poem but not exactly my view of how it works. Your idea is very good and positive. |
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Re: Tightrope
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by pixie on
Thursday, 15th July 2004 @ 05:54:09 PM AEST
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great poem,
pixie xx |
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