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Dying Failure
Contributed by
Essentially9
on
Thursday, 15th July 2004 @ 11:02:09 PM in AEST
Topic:
EmotionalPoetry
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Dying Failure
It's lost to us
We're going to die
The love's downfall
The threats outnumber
What will be forever
It's lost to us
The future is ruined
Because of me
It's on my shoulders now
It's not your fault
But mine alone
My failures ruined
What could have been
The world will end
Because of me
Too much of this
Rides on my shoulders
No one knows
Except one
What this act has done
The threat increased
And I'm going to die
Because of it
It's lost to us
The war is lost
Because of me
And we will all die
Because of me
This downfall
Ruins it all
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Essentially9
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2004-07-15 23:02:09]
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Re: Dying Failure
(User Rating: 1 )
by lostinmyself on
Friday, 16th July 2004 @ 09:56:46 AM AEST
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I do not understand it but it is still a good write..
It all seems so sad.
Dont blame yourself.
Great write,
Phil
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Re: Dying Failure
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by afterdark on
Thursday, 10th February 2005 @ 07:48:50 PM AEST
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You know perhaps your not as vauge here as you desire to be kitten..Why is it you, and Daniela, are not writing and getting published..I mean it..I will say this damn much..In my life I have read many poets and many poems..By far the better ones are
T.S.Elliot
Charles Burkowsiki
Sylvia Plath
And Daniela Marie Violin and You Jennifer..I mean this simply due to the fact that no matter what you write..Genius swims an ocean.. |
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