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I am
Contributed by
drummerchic18
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Thursday, 15th July 2004 @ 11:40:16 PM in AEST
Topic:
oops
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I am a little girl who clings to her heart
I wonder why the stars shine brightly in the nighttime sky
I hear a faint love song from Heaven
I see a rocky path with ridges and stones
I want to make a difference
I am a little girl who clings to her heart
I pretend that I have a father who cares
I feel a tugging at my soul
I touch my tears and place them on my heart
I worry what days ahead will bring
I cry for peace in my home and in my heart
I am a little girl who clings to her heart
I understand that I am not invincible, even though I wish I were
I say that I can handle myself
I dream of love
I try to keep strong for my mom
I hope that my heart wont desert me
I am a little girl who clings to her heart.
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Re: I am
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by Asatru on
Friday, 16th July 2004 @ 08:52:08 AM AEST
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| I like your style, I'll be sure to look for more of your poems to come. I enjoyed how you used "I am a little girl who clings to her heart" in every stanza, it pushed it out that you wanted it known but was not overly annoying. Great write. Keep writing. |
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Re: I am
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by Former_Member on
Friday, 16th July 2004 @ 12:08:31 PM AEST
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| I luv it :) I think its great...I can relate 100% I don't have the best family here....to tell ya the truth, I don't think I have a family :P |
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Re: I am
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by emystar on
Monday, 2nd August 2004 @ 12:46:38 AM AEST
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Sad but written like a pro.
Girl u can write!
U have much wisdom to be so young.
Keep up the masterpeices as I havn't read any of your poems that wasn't written like a professionaal.
luv, huggs,
emy |
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