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You
Contributed by
shrunkin_fool34142316
on
Thursday, 15th July 2004 @ 11:45:32 PM in AEST
Topic:
LostLove
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I don't know what to do
I'm so lost without my boo
Missing you is losing me
Why can't I just let these feelings be
All I do is sleep and cry
I still can't seem to say goodbye
Missing you with every moment
This happens to frequent
I cry sitting in a dark corner
It seems that I only get dumber
Wondering what your doing evry moment of every day
If I say you what would you say
It's like I'm lost deep within
But being with you seems like a sin
I can't get over you
It's like a permenat flu
But I must say just so you know I do love you
Now I must go for I need a tissue
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2004-07-15 23:45:32]
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Re: You
(User Rating: 1 )
by ArdRi79 on
Friday, 16th July 2004 @ 11:37:11 AM AEST
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| the way you changed the rhyming structure in the last 2 lines really drove your emotions home 2 me well written |
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