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It's over
Contributed by
Dizza_13
on
Friday, 16th July 2004 @ 01:21:21 AM in AEST
Topic:
LostLove
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You know the things you say,
It hurt me just the other day.
And well maybe its true,
That Im not good enough for you.
Well if thats so,
Then I dont know if I still love you,
Cos isnt it enough,
For me just to love your heart and to love your soul?
Well and if its not, then I think Im through,
Having this feeling.
I could have healed your soul,
And made you whole,
But you were blinded.
Now I would have spent all night,
Just trying to make you feel alright,
And holding you.
But now my love is gone,
And my soul is through,
Being tortured by you.
Copyright ©
Dizza_13
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2004-07-16 01:21:21]
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Re: It's over
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by Archie on
Friday, 16th July 2004 @ 04:40:01 AM AEST
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| Great poem if a relationship is hurtful and destructive it is good to move on. |
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Re: It's over
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by lostinmyself on
Friday, 16th July 2004 @ 08:53:11 AM AEST
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Hey, good poem.
I can relate alot to this.
Its so sad how this happens.
Good write,
Phil |
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Re: It's over
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by corrupted_minds on
Saturday, 17th July 2004 @ 06:32:16 AM AEST
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Dylan there is nothing you could write that doesnt touch me, good write and keep it up!
your pal,
Loz
xoxoxo |
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Re: It's over
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by corrupted_minds on
Tuesday, 20th July 2004 @ 06:26:39 PM AEST
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Really good diz, another one of your hidden talents, it hurts to lose someone that u never really had
love alice ;) |
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Re: It's over
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by andrewhs on
Wednesday, 18th November 2009 @ 02:41:14 AM AEST
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| Just to say i really liked the emotion of your poem as i can identify with those feelings. Andrew x |
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