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Across the Seas and Sands of Time
Contributed by
Tanna
on
Saturday, 26th October 2002 @ 08:00:00 AM in AEST
Topic:
LostLove
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Across the seas and sands of time
My soul called out to you
Two similar spirits, both battered and worn
Awaiting happiness , long overdue.
Chartering the waves, crossing the dunes
Your love once beaconed to me
So many obsticals, an upward climb
A reality not meant to be.
We weathered the cold, withstood the heat
Where did it start to fail
Both sides wondering what went astray
What made love go stale?
Drowning in an ocean, burried in the sand
Everything went so wrong
I realize now that I never held your heart
To you alone, it has always belonged.
Copyright ©
Tanna
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2002-10-26 08:00:00]
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Re: Across the Seas and Sands of Time
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by Chrissylee on
Saturday, 26th October 2002 @ 08:46:06 AM AEST
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Could feel the love here Tanna ... well done
peace, love and happy poetry |
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Re: Across the Seas and Sands of Time
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by Lia on
Saturday, 26th October 2002 @ 09:27:26 AM AEST
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| This is sad :( ...I hope things get better for you |
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Re: Across the Seas and Sands of Time
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by Fwog on
Monday, 6th January 2003 @ 09:31:45 AM AEST
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Hi Tanna,
This is one hell of a write ( am I allowed to say that?) A wonderful flow that carried me on a journey, sad but enlightening.
Thanks for this |
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Re: Across the Seas and Sands of Time
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by riverofwords on
Tuesday, 18th February 2003 @ 11:09:17 AM AEST
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the pain of love lost love ...good write
carried away on the emotion of the words
well done
peace be yuor journey
Terry
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