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wind chimes
Contributed by
spooky
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Friday, 16th July 2004 @ 03:44:12 AM in AEST
Topic:
Lifepoems
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wind chimes as the rain falls down,,
lonely forest cries, as the city lights dance,,
soft cries from the whispering woods,,
but danceing moonlight on forest leaves are wet..
no one comes to greet the woods,,
that the forest has to offer,,
gentle are the aminals are,,
but scarry as the night falls,,
city lights gilstens and gleams,,
as the carslights roll along,,
poeple danceing,,people walking,,
doing what they want,,
quiet is the night that follows,,
the owls bright eye's,,
and crackling branches below,,
alone but not afraid,
the woods are their own,,
covering the ground,,
with tall trees above,,
leaves fall, and and pathes are no more,,
city ways differ from this magical place,,
were people walk,, and there fairies dance,,
music aloud in city towns,,
soft and gentle as the wind chimes at night,,
speak to me softly and I'll show the way,,
to a forest of dreams,,
or a city to forget,,
craig s. meeks
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spooky
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2004-07-16 03:44:12]
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Re: wind chimes
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by Asatru on
Friday, 16th July 2004 @ 03:59:50 AM AEST
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| It's alway good to get away, good job. Keep writing. |
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Re: wind chimes
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by Ilhar on
Friday, 16th July 2004 @ 06:10:33 AM AEST
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i will take the forest anytime....amongst creations finest gifts
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Re: wind chimes
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by lostinmyself on
Friday, 16th July 2004 @ 08:35:41 AM AEST
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I would live in the woods if i could.
I hate the town.
Beautiful poem,
Phil
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Re: wind chimes
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by shelby on
Friday, 16th July 2004 @ 09:55:27 AM AEST
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makes me long for my mountains and scented pines crystal lakes of home wonderful poem
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Re: wind chimes
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by ladyfawn on
Monday, 19th July 2004 @ 12:47:17 AM AEST
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this is so pretty, craig, so true and just wonderful, i love living in the forest here, your poem is special to me:) hugs n' love nessa
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Re: wind chimes
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by Tanmaya on
Tuesday, 20th July 2004 @ 03:28:50 AM AEST
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Beautiful poem.
I liked the way you end it -
speak to me softly and I'll show the way..
to a forest of dreams..
or a city to forget..
Great!
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Re: wind chimes
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by Archie on
Friday, 15th October 2004 @ 04:17:56 AM AEST
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| You portrayed good imagery in this poem. Great job. |
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