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You innocent fool
Contributed by
gherkin
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Friday, 16th July 2004 @ 09:52:19 AM in AEST
Topic:
dedicatedpoems
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He's changed, has my friend,
Far too much, to forget
What was said, or to mend
What's been broken, and yet
There's no sense of loss,
No pain, or regret.
Just a bridge to be crossed
A fear to be met
I don't mind that he's gone
But the reasons are hiding
There was no game to be won
But the pressure was mounting
He said I was 'whingy
Snidey and spiteful'
The way you treated Nelly
Was the same, it was pityfull
The excuses that you gave
Didn't stand true
Stop acting so brave
'Cause who did we lose to?
They're not worth the writing
You can guess the 'type'
That's why i gave up fighting
Each and every, a little ****
The results were so predictable
Of your little hunt
So desperate, it's adorable,
To get your wang in some girls a ****
Copyright ©
gherkin
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2004-07-16 09:52:19]
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Re: You innocent fool
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by Former_Member on
Wednesday, 5th January 2005 @ 02:42:51 PM AEST
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| Watch spelling. pitiful, whiney, and I'm not sure snidey is a word. Interesting write from a young perspective. Cheers! |
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