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Break Me Free
Contributed by
screwup
on
Friday, 16th July 2004 @ 11:35:25 AM in AEST
Topic:
Suicide
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I've got to break free
out of this prison
I've got to just be
looked up in my room
and in my head
sometimes I wish
that I were dead
I've got to run away
far away from this place
I've got to disapear
without a trace
I've gotta cut
to convince myself I'm alive
because that way
I truely thrive
I live to die
I am nothing more
than my true self
why can't you see
from deep inside
my plea
my plea of insanidy
break me free
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2004-07-16 11:35:25]
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Re: Break Me Free
(User Rating: 1 )
by pixie on
Friday, 16th July 2004 @ 11:47:35 AM AEST
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This has struck a chord with me as I was feeling like this the other day, but I am coming out of my depression again...... very powerful write, I hope you can find a way out too, be strong,
takecare
pixie xx
great write btw. |
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Re: Break Me Free
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by ArdRi79 on
Friday, 16th July 2004 @ 11:50:39 AM AEST
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| The way you wrote this in just 1 stanza without breaking it up works really well here, Ive gone thru the same stuff 2 and this reallllly does express it, congrats nice write and good luck |
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