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A world With Peace
Contributed by
coaster
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Friday, 16th July 2004 @ 04:33:24 PM in AEST
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Within my dreams I see a place where we can all roll in peace
No use to hate on one another and there’s no use for the police
Music will always play on through the day and all through the night
A place where no matter who you are you’ll always have equal rights
There will be no corruption within the minds of the young or old
No more violence is happening because it’s the love that we hold
There’s no more use for winning because there’s nothing to defeat
Even when not at whole we can all feel complete
A place where we can all smile for a new day and a new way
A place where the sun may be gone but all the emotions will stay
Within my dreams I see a place where we can all roll in peace
Where there’s no use for frustration cuz only happiness will release
Where in reality you only feel the need to scream
But only comforted with the thoughts of the dream
Only happy thoughts for the love ones that live up in the sky
And if you’re ever feeling low you can always get high
There’s no use to worry here and we’ll pour the heavenly champagne
With every laugh that is given off, it will overwrite all the pain
A place where all the tears will be wiped from our eyes
A place where everyone connects and all feelings will tie
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Re: A world With Peace
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by DarkFey on
Monday, 23rd August 2004 @ 10:07:08 PM AEST
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| A very beautiful and hopeful write. Great job on this piece, if only it could be that way some day!! Good job, DarkFey |
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Re: A world With Peace
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by Essentially9 on
Tuesday, 24th August 2004 @ 09:42:20 PM AEST
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| i afree with darkfey. brilliant piece but its only in dreams that this is or will be true. |
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Re: A world With Peace
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by beatleman on
Thursday, 26th August 2004 @ 01:24:04 AM AEST
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| wow just thinking of a world like that is nice. goodjob on the poem i enjoyed it |
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Re: A world With Peace
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by beatleman on
Thursday, 26th August 2004 @ 01:24:11 AM AEST
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| wow just thinking of a world like that is nice. goodjob on the poem i enjoyed it |
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Re: A world With Peace
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by beatleman on
Thursday, 26th August 2004 @ 01:24:27 AM AEST
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| wow just thinking of a world like that is nice. goodjob on the poem i enjoyed it |
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