|
 Menu
|
|
|
|
|
Social
|
|
|
|
|
Battle For My Mind
Contributed by
waos
on
Friday, 16th July 2004 @ 07:17:34 PM in AEST
Topic:
DarkPoetry
|
It's a battle in my mind,
contemplating,
debating,
such primeval parts of being,
such basic facts of life.
How to ease the pain inside...
How to find a place to hide...
How to find the part of me
that died.
How much pain can I cause,
until it gets its fill?
And how much pain can I feel,
until it makes me kill?
And the battle that rages
upon my scarred, charred skin,
works its way deeper,
fighting for the win.
How to ease the pain inside...
How to find a place to hide...
How to find the part of me
that died.
And the voices rage
in the grounds of my mind.
And it leaves me to beg
to keep it to me confined.
But it's just a battle, a battle of my mind..
Trying to find how to ease the pain inside...
Trying to find how to hide...
How to find the parts of me
that have died.
Copyright ©
waos
... [
2004-07-16 19:17:34]
(Date/Time posted on
site)
Advertisments:
|
|
|
|
|
|
Sorry, comments are no longer allowed for anonymous, please register for a free membership to access this feature and more
|
|
All comments are owned by the poster. Your Poetry
Dot Com is not responsible for the content of any
comment.
That said, if you find an offensive comment, please
contact via the FeedBack Form with details, including poem title
etc.
|
|
|
Re: Battle For My Mind
(User Rating: 1 )
by xxbreathlessx on
Friday, 16th July 2004 @ 09:52:50 PM AEST
(User
Info | Send
a Message)
|
wow AWESOME job! i love the line:
"How to find the parts of me
that have died."
keep up the writing!
|
|
|
Re: Battle For My Mind
(User Rating: 1 )
by lovingcritters on
Saturday, 17th July 2004 @ 04:26:45 PM AEST
(User
Info | Send
a Message)
|
Woas, this is a remarkable poem.
Your repeating for emphasis.....makes it so!
I really enjoyed this read, and I know everyone else will too!
I'm sorry I missed your poems until now, but I have you in my favorites now......so watch out......I'll be back!
Wonderful poetry.....you have much talent...but I wish you felt better inside....I'll keep you in my prayers
Poetic hugs
consue
lovingcritters |
|
|
Re: Battle For My Mind
(User Rating: 1 )
by bobotheclown on
Saturday, 17th July 2004 @ 04:28:47 PM AEST
(User
Info | Send
a Message)
|
very good Kara I hope you find something that can ease your pain inside. Maybe writing is that 'something'.
Bobo (Joel) |
|
|
Re: Battle For My Mind
(User Rating: 1 )
by faith_my_eyes on
Sunday, 25th July 2004 @ 11:19:06 PM AEST
(User
Info | Send
a Message)
|
Kara excellent poem.. remember Christ shares in our struggles
God bless friend
Emily |
|
|
|
· 
Poetry
Site Help
Members
Areas
Reference
Search
Top
Others
