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Regarding Isolation
Contributed by
merry
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Friday, 16th July 2004 @ 08:46:36 PM in AEST
Topic:
Lifepoems
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I bled in isolation tanks you called love
You sent me best regards and chocolates
Waiting for me to die of desperation
Or maybe find the sharp knives
Instead I found relics in the drawer
My mothers broken wrist watch
For which there was no cure
The daylight turned flat before sunset
Copyright ©
merry
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2004-07-16 20:46:36]
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Re: Regarding Isolation
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by emystar on
Friday, 16th July 2004 @ 08:54:16 PM AEST
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Sad but great writing.
luv, huggs,
emy |
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Re: Regarding Isolation
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by Essentially9 on
Friday, 16th July 2004 @ 08:58:08 PM AEST
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| muy interesante. =] |
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Re: Regarding Isolation
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by Stitch on
Friday, 16th July 2004 @ 09:11:37 PM AEST
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Too much of a good thing? No, that's not what I mean. I'm not making sense, but I know these feelings so well. You say so much in so few words.
Stitch |
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Re: Regarding Isolation
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by Dysfunction_Oral on
Friday, 16th July 2004 @ 09:33:40 PM AEST
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| Hmm... very simple yet misunderstanding to the reader.... which makes your artwork subtle... :P |
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Re: Regarding Isolation
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by Former_Member on
Friday, 16th July 2004 @ 09:36:21 PM AEST
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The picture added credence to the words you were conveying here! Painful emotional write, in few expressive words. Well done!
Angel always...joni |
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Re: Regarding Isolation
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by Silent-No-More on
Friday, 16th July 2004 @ 10:13:02 PM AEST
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An intriguing write... kind of wonderfully melancholy and yet somehow strong at the same time. It would seem that the daylight has turned flat - but you certainly have not. *hug*
Hoping the sun is shining again soon for you,
SNM |
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