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to you
Contributed by
jsizzle
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Saturday, 17th July 2004 @ 04:32:42 AM in AEST
Topic:
LostLove
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This is what you make me do
Lay here night and day
Crying over nothing
Because that is what you truly are, nothing
But I think of you as this flawless jewel.
Why is my perception so screwed up
Reality was never near,
I never used to realize this.
I would only thrive off what I believed
To be my only provider
What I believed made me truly happy
But in the end I only feel worse
So much time and emotions
All invested into one thing
Now that it is thrashed
What am I suppose to do
Try to start off brand new
Learning how to do
Everything all over again
Only to know that in the end
I will be in my bed
Crying over nothing
Laying there night and day
Because
This is what you make me do
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jsizzle
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2004-07-17 04:32:42]
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Re: to you
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by buchi on
Saturday, 17th July 2004 @ 06:30:30 AM AEST
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This poem is my personal idea of excellence!!!
Unique elaboration ...of the mind... |
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Re: to you
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by rightwingbrknwing on
Saturday, 17th July 2004 @ 07:24:01 AM AEST
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| absolutly wonderful, you must've felt some kind of relief after writing this cuz i think that everything you meant to express came through beautifuly |
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Re: to you
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by Daniela_Maria_Violin on
Saturday, 17th July 2004 @ 09:03:21 AM AEST
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| hope you felt better after writing this... I know I would have... very good write, I can relate. |
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Re: to you
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by KurdtBeantheWIKKED on
Saturday, 17th July 2004 @ 02:56:42 PM AEST
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He's that light sneeze in the morning.
not the flu
just a sneeze
keep that in mind
Great poem! |
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