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Contributed by
grip-wth-broken-fingers
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Saturday, 17th July 2004 @ 11:50:02 AM in AEST
Topic:
AngryPoetry
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this body will never be free shackled and bound no one will help me cut the ties these eyes will never dry lost count of the tears that have fallen for you
this nation will never be free shackled and bound by invalidity
everybody is stuck in there own demise no chnace of a true lie there only chance is to be true to there self take there life suicide
so many tears have fallen for so many lies have been spoken pain is the only thing that will ever run free
lives full of tragedy eyes full of pain mouthful of poison truth down the drain
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Re: free
(User Rating: 1 ) by apollo on
Saturday, 17th July 2004 @ 11:53:37 AM AEST (User
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so true. is there such a thing as truth anymore? it seems that all the things we are supposed to adhere as "truth" turns around to be a cover-up. i really liked this poem you really opened up to your true thoughts and feelings. loved it.
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Re: free
(User Rating: 1 ) by pixie on
Saturday, 17th July 2004 @ 11:56:19 AM AEST (User
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very good write...... really enjoyed it
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Re: free
(User Rating: 1 ) by DeLeriousTearZ on
Saturday, 17th July 2004 @ 10:47:10 PM AEST (User
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I love how you put so much truth behind your words! Another awesome write!
*Jo |
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