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Everything I Don't Need
Contributed by
hooray_its_jen
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Saturday, 17th July 2004 @ 12:00:30 PM in AEST
Topic:
AngryPoetry
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Who am I?
No,
WHAT am I?
Am I someone for them
To put in a glass box
And let the children
Point their fingers at me
And whisper?
I can't carry the weight
Of their pitying stares,
I just can't.
I can't handle this on my own,
And their fake sympathy
Is only making it worse.
To them
I am just some kind of animal
To put in a cage
Or some kind of object
To put in a museum
So they can all stare at me.
They say they care,
But if they really cared
They would leave me alone,
They would leave my family alone too
And stop acting like they're concerned.
I don't need them,
All I need is my dad back.
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2004-07-17 12:00:30]
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Re: Everything I Don't Need
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by pixie on
Saturday, 17th July 2004 @ 12:05:24 PM AEST
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Awwww Jen, I am sorry to hear that you feel like this hun,... *hugs you*
great , powerful write tho, it's funny out of the worst situations come some of our best work...
takecare
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Re: Everything I Don't Need
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by lovespoetic0518 on
Saturday, 17th July 2004 @ 12:34:18 PM AEST
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There are alot of times where people get involved in situations that they know nothing about how hard it is to deal with. I hope they do give you the space you need.
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Re: Everything I Don't Need
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by DeLeriousTearZ on
Saturday, 17th July 2004 @ 10:54:47 PM AEST
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Great write. I love the part where you wrote "I can't handle this on my own, And their fake sympathy Is only making it worse." I knoW how that feels. Take it Easy
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Re: Everything I Don't Need
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by ladyfawn on
Monday, 19th July 2004 @ 12:09:32 PM AEST
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awww....... extra big hugs n' love nessa
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Re: Everything I Don't Need
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by Former_Member on
Wednesday, 21st July 2004 @ 09:48:44 AM AEST
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The only good thing that comes from emotional upset is great poetry, this is wonderful work.
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Re: Everything I Don't Need
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by arden on
Saturday, 31st July 2004 @ 10:49:49 AM AEST
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oh jen im so sorry :(
all your writes are filled with so much saddness. if you ever need to talk or anything then feel free to do so.
great write.
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