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wondering
Contributed by
grip-wth-broken-fingers
on
Saturday, 17th July 2004 @ 01:04:17 PM in AEST
Topic:
AngryPoetry
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my heart turned black the sky turned grey
why did you leave me that day
sat and stared at the ceiling for days
wondering why you left me that day
drank myself into a state of suicide bleeding
why don't you love me anymore ?
some one help me understand why
people treat me this way
help me realise how to be o.k
the rain fell down so hard that day
my heart turned black my sky turned grey
the pain i tryed not to put on display
with a fake smile each and every rainy day
wondering if you would ever come back again
left out in the cold
left to die
left with a broken heart and a half stitched soul
please tell me how you could be so cruel
as the rain falls down today i still wonder
if you think of me
as my heart is healing but still its tainted
by you
as the rain falls my heart turns black the sky turns grey
wonder if you ever loved me anyway
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Re: wondering
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by brokensoul on
Saturday, 17th July 2004 @ 01:56:41 PM AEST
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| brilliant i can relate to this perfectly love can be so devastating |
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Re: wondering
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by UnfallenTears on
Saturday, 17th July 2004 @ 07:47:25 PM AEST
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| I just wanted to thank you for commenting on my poem. This one was beautiful. It almost made me cry. |
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