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Guarding The Deck
Contributed by
faithmairee
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Saturday, 17th July 2004 @ 01:41:50 PM in AEST
Topic:
ChildrensPoetry
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fishing is fun
with buddy along
guarding the deck
scooping out the catch
fishing was made
for long summer days
me and buddy
could stay here all day
we bring a lunch
and some lemonade
we won't go home
until the sun fades
sometimes we catch fish
and sometimes we won't
we still have fun
but the fish sure don't
By Faith Mairee
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faithmairee
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2004-07-17 13:41:50]
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Re: Guarding The Deck
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by C2C on
Saturday, 17th July 2004 @ 02:33:53 PM AEST
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Omg, i absolutely love your poem. The ending was really funny! ha, i'm still grinning about it.
You've made my day!
~Tuesday~ |
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Re: Guarding The Deck
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by Rakerman1999 on
Saturday, 17th July 2004 @ 03:23:33 PM AEST
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How refreshing!! Simple times....simple pleasures, simply penned. I love it!! :o)
Roses
Larry |
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Re: Guarding The Deck
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by richcol7522 on
Friday, 27th August 2004 @ 08:56:06 AM AEST
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Its a cute write.. reminds me of when I was a kid and me and a buddy mine would go fishin'. good job
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