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HateLove
Contributed by
hilaryduffisme_yah
on
Saturday, 17th July 2004 @ 05:59:26 PM in AEST
Topic:
EmotionalPoetry
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When I'm all alone in a storm,
I try to find a way to keep me warm.
I start to freeze so bad it burns,
Ok I'm hurt now it is your turn!
You may be the storm but I'm the drain,
I will soak up all the rain!
You can hurt me all you want,
But alls I'll do is rust!
You hurt me bad you hurt me good,
But I'll always be in a soaking mood.
I'll suck you up and I'll pull you in,
Then I'll do it all over agian!
~Amber Savage
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Re: HateLove
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by apollo on
Saturday, 17th July 2004 @ 06:03:38 PM AEST
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what a lucky guy this is. you've really expressed your emotion in this and this jonathan guy is a very lucky person. to have someone care for someone so much and to write there emotion into poetry for them is just amazing. i loved it.
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